Saturday, December 19, 2009
HW 31 A & B
Friday, December 18, 2009
HW 30
- In the Four Noble Truths Dukkha is represented as birth, old age, sickness, and death; grief, sorrow, physical and mental pain; involvement in what one dislikes and separation from what one likes; not getting what one wants; in summary, the five groups of grasping (or craving) are the source of suffering.
- Threefold Dukkha is ordinary physical and mental pain, that is, pure or intrinsic suffering, suffering as the result of change, suffering owing to the impermanent and ephemeral nature of things; and sufferings due to the formations of individuals and their temporal or finite states.
- It is maintained that all transient beings, whether gods, humans, pretas (deceased), animals, or inhabitant of hell, are subject to Dukkha. Gods suffer the least since they are in a hierarchy of different beings, and the inhabitants of hell the most. Humans lying midway experience a mixture of suffering and happiness; this makes them best fitted to escape from their temporary surroundings, because the mixture gives them both the opportunity and the impetus to discriminate the nature of reality.
In my own words I think that their first definition is basically trying to say is that we all suffer. Some of us suffer more than others but we are all humans with feelings and emotions. Our lives play out more similarly than we realize we are all brought to this planet and we are not here forever. We all see death and we all see sickness. We all get hurt and have to learn to cope with it. We are all here trying to figure out and discover our purpose before our time runs out. By doing this we figure out what makes us happy and what doesn’t, yet one person doesn’t always get everything they strive for. We are all here on this planet together and only for a brief moment. The second definition continues to emphasize the suffering but the idea that after everything we do there will be suffering. Since we are a creature that has feelings and emotions we are guaranteed to come out of situations with sorrow. Maybe not because we are upset about what we just did but the fact that it is over. The third definition reminds us that we are equal regardless if we come from different places. That in our lifetime we will all experience Dukkha. We use “happiness” as a way to escape reality, this than allows us to forget our suffering for that moment. By doing this we distract ourselves for what we all know is coming next. Before I decided to focus on this one philosophy I was thinking about my own idea of why we find it so necessary to live the way we do. I think this universe and this world is just like the game Jenga. For those who have never heard of this it is the game where you have a tower of wood blocks and you have to pull ones from the bottom out one by one and keep stacking them on top of each other. If the tower falls the game is over. Just like Jenga I think humans represent the wooden blocks and the tower represents the world. We are all here together for that brief moment in time and although we hate to admit it we all need each other to survive. Every move we make and every moment we live has an affect on the other 6,706,993,152 people on this planet. Just like in the game we try to move forward to get closer and closer to the top of things. While doing this though sometimes we suffer and loose loved ones, family members friends. This than makes us feel incomplete and we loose our sense of “happiness”. For just like our lifespan is brief so is our happiness. So while we play the game of life we feel it necessary to do as much as we can before our tower falls. We feel that without all the things we buy, all the conflicts and drama we make and all the unnecessary judgments we have throughout out lives when the day comes where the tower falls we will feel incomplete about ourselves. I think some also to factor in is that all the wooden blocks are identical to one another; I think we are frightened to want to be different. Maybe not frightened but unaware of how to not be a cookie cut person. We are so focused on death that we sometimes forget to live.
Monday, December 14, 2009
HW 29
“There is no solution to discovering cool you force cool to move on to the next thing.” It’s a never-ending cycle that we continue to allow to repeat itself because we don’t have the self-control to stop it. It seems as if we like the media in a weird way, that without them we wouldn’t be able to function. Is it the fact that we are afraid to be ourselves so we constantly need the “advice” from those who know best? However for a person who hasn’t necessarily caught on to this it isn’t what will look best on you or what will help you be a better person all around, it’s the product that will sell the best. Then there is also the idea of being an “individual” the truth is no one is. There isn’t one person in the world that is far different from the rest of us. We are all just copies of one another. Although we hate to admit it, in reality it’s the truth. So when we find one person cool I am sure there is someone out there who is just like them, does this mean they are both cool or does that make them both uncool? I think attention is nice as long as it is positive but it seems that most of the time attention is usually negative. Do we do all of this to be happier people? If the attention we receive is negative how can we be happy? Corporations are funding us with the right attire to satisfy the arch type we live up too. So in a way we are both doing each other favors we give them money they give us “happiness”.
Then we need to address the question is it all just because of the thousands of ads we see on TV, billboards, the World Wide Web? I think it has an affect on some people but personally I don’t know how much influence it has on me. I think the place where I am most drawn into the medias trap is on the streets of NYC. When you see someone up and close, they are real. What we watch on TV is just another tool of manipulation. They are not as real as the people I am surrounded by. My mom was telling me recently how companies hire people to advertise their product without saying they work for the company. They literally advertise the company in a non-chalet way and make it more personal. I googled this type of job and information for college students looking for work came up. “For the Public Relations Student: Working as a secret shopper can be an interesting and unexpectedly fun gig. (Additionally, you often get to keep the groceries or other products your employer pays for you to buy.) Some companies hire secret shoppers to "work" undercover in their stores as shoppers, whereas other companies hire shoppers and send them out to different stores.” (http://collegelife.about.com/od/moneyfinances/a/offbeatjobs.htm) No longer are people listening to there TVs there is a new solution to making the money, manipulate people right under their noses. Another tool similar to this is by sponsoring people; this is used in the skateboarding industry. The companies give all there products to teens to ride around on there “cool” skateboards with their “cool” clothing making all the other people their age jealous. This then inspires there audiences to go to these stores that sell the product that looks “cool” so that they can be just like the skating billboards.
If you think about it not only is it the companies involved in the manipulation it’s the government as well. The government essentially makes all of these rules when in reality they are well aware they will be broken. In many countries they have no drinking age or they drinking age is much lower than the United States. The government claims it is because the brain is still developing but then why is it so much lower in other countries? I’m assuming that when alcohol companies are trying to figure out ways to market their products to the world they also factor in the teen population. Although the legal drinking age is 21 they are well aware that a lot of the profit comes from underage drinking. This money goes right back to the government who are making the laws forbidding it. Isn’t that a little strange? I don’t know exactly how the saying goes but the whole idea of the thrill of doing something when you know it is really bad is much more fun than doing it when your allowed to. I am more than sure the companies take this into account when marketing and maybe even work with the government. The law is almost just another key part of the manipulation involved in making high school and college kids feel the need to look cool. This is a sick country.
Below is a song that is a complete advirtisment which includes: The United States of America always being a party (influencing people to move here = $$$$), Hollywood being this AMAZING place ($$$), Jay-Z ($$$ for him), Kicks aka sneakers ($$$), not feeling comfortable so trying to change to fit in (infleuncing all girls they need to do the same = $$$), Britney Spears ($$$) which all leads back to being cool!
Party in the USA - Miley Cyrus
I hopped on the plane at LAX
With a dream of my cargidan
Welcome to the land of fame access
Am I gonna fit in?
Jumped in the cab here I am for the first time
Look to my right
And I see the Hollywood sign
This is all so qrazy
Everybody seem so famouse!
My tummy's turnin'
And I'm feeling kinda homesick
Too much pressure
And I'm nervous
'Cause when the taximan turned on the radio
And a Jay Z song was on
And a Jay Z song was on
And a Jay Z song was on
(Chorus)
So I put my hands up
They're playin' my song
The butterflies fly away
Noddin' my head like 'Yeah'
Movin' my hips like 'Yeah'
I got my hands up
They're playing my song
I know I'm gonna be okay
Yeah
It's a Party in the USA
Yeah
It's a Party in the USA
Get to club in my taxicab
Everybody's lookin' at me now
Like "Who's that chick with rocking' kicks she gotta be from out of town"
So hard with my girls all around me
It's definitley not a Nashville party
'Cause all I see are stilletos
I guess I never got the memo
My tummy's turnin'
And I'm feeling kinda homesick
Too much pressure
And I'm nervous
And the DJ dropped my favorite tune
And a Britney song was on
And a Britney song was on
And a Britney song was on
(Chorus)
So I put my hands up
They're playin' my song
The butterflies fly away
Noddin' my head like 'Yeah'
Movin' my hips like 'Yeah'
I got my hands up
They're playing my song
I know I'm gonna be okay
Yeah
It's a Party in the USA
Yeah
It's a Party in the USA
Feel like hoppin' on a flight
Back to my hometown tonight
Something stops me everytime
The DJ plays my song and I feel alright!
So I put my hands up
They're playin' my song
The butterflies fly away
Noddin' my head like 'Yeah'
(Noddin' my head)
Movin' my hips like 'Yeah'
I got my hands up
They're playing my song
I know I'm gonna be okay
Yeah
It's a Party in the USA
(Na, na na na na na)
Yeah
Sunday, December 6, 2009
HW 27-Informal Research-Interviews & Surveys-Continued
Private:
Please describe your school: Um, I go to an all girls school, there are around 50 girls in my grade. We all know each other really well. The workload is crazy. Most of the girls live in the neighborhood of the school, a couple live in Westchester or like Brooklyn. Some girls party a lot while some girls don’t do anything at all. There aren't really cliques if there is any exclusion it’s between two people not a whole bunch of people. There are of course groups of friends but they aren’t really exclusive.
What does cool mean to you? That’s a good question…cool means being able to pull anything off. Or get away with anything. Physical Characteristics play a huge role, really skinny and pretty of course, its even better when someone has something corky or odd that looks good on them.
Why do you believe people are so concerned about physical appearance? Very few people know you well enough to judge you on anything but your appearance. How you present yourself to the world. I want to say it comes from magazines and movies but usually the pressure comes from competition with your friends. You’re going to be more jealous of a friend than a movie star.
Do clothes play a huge role in the cool factor? Yeah, because there can be a lot of things that can be cool like your personality or your lifestyle, but the biggest factor is appearance.
What if someone was ugly in your opinion but had expensive designer clothes on? It wouldn’t make a difference they would still be ugly. I wouldn’t consider them cool because if there’s no foundation the house will fall down. If they are weird they can’t pull anything off.
Do you think your cool? I’m working on that…I wouldn’t be able to know if I was you cant be objective when you ask yourself that question. Its kind of impossible to judge yourself I would have to ask others.
When you think of the word cool who comes to your mind first? Really tall skinny, white skinny jeans J Brand of course…Knee high leather boots from Marc Jacob…Navy V-neck t-shirt from American Apparel I guess. A really cool colorful jacket I don’t know which designer but it should be one. Tiffany and Co. Jewelry to top it off. And don’t forget the Anya Hindmarch bag.
Why do you think we care so much about being cool? It makes you unique yet accepted at the same time.
Public:
Please describe your school: My school is very liberal. It’s not like a lot of other public schools because we don’t take regents, its very stressful. It’s a very creative school; people are into music, art and history. It is a medium sized school, 300 kids per grade. Most of the kids live in Park Slope, Brooklyn and the Upper West Side. Most of the people that attend have known each other their whole lives. Kids are really into getting their messages out to others about different cultural and social concerns. Most of the kids at my school party…like everyone actually. There aren’t that many cliques but there are big groups of friends that never leave each other and everyone else just falls wherever.
What does cool mean to you? Cool means being really original and not afraid to look stupid or feel self-conscious. I think a really cool person is someone who follows their own beliefs and doesn’t conform to the beliefs of others.
Where do these original ideas start from though? I guess just like observations from their life and what they have seen in the world. Someone has to be really passionate about what they believe in and that makes a person cool. If someone is just going along with what other people think then that means they are usually naïve. A leader of a movement or a group disserves a lot of respect in my book. It takes a lot for someone to voice his or her opinion since everyone is so critical.
Do you think there is one set idea of cool? Never there are so many different opinions in the world there’s no way that one person can view “cool” like the person sitting next to them. Its like saying a certain song is the best song ever because everyone has different taste in music.
Do you think you are cool? I mean not really there are certain aspects of me that I feel are cool. When I am doing something I really love or I am with people that make me happy I feel cool. But I’m still learning a lot about life and the way I want to live it so I dot really know exactly who I am yet. I try to live my life with no shame because I feel as though people with negative attitudes have negative lives. They aren't living their live to the fullest so instead of being focused on trying to be “cool” it is better to not care and be positive. I wouldn’t really care if I were classified as cool or uncool because I would rather get to know myself better than waste time being so concerned.
When you think of the word cool who comes to your mind first? This girl in my film class is really confident she is really passionate about her work, everything about her screams “I DON’T CARE WHAT PEOPLE THINK!” While at the same time she really cares about the environment and social justice. Being focused on big things in the world like social justice makes you so much cooler focusing on small materialistic things that make you selfish.
Why do you think we care so much about being cool? The media portrays “cool” as being beautiful, having money, drinking and doing drugs. This makes others feel that they have to live up to false expectations. People don’t usually focus on the positive things within them and try to improve all imperfection; they do this by comparing themselves to celebrities. People shouldn’t have to relay on other sources to tell them what is cool.
Thursday, December 3, 2009
HW 27-Informal Research-Interviews & Surveys
We walked up to the first guy as he sat in Madison Square Park, he had a map in one hand and he seemed to be day dreaming. In my mind he appeared to be a tourist, from the map and his heavy accent. The first question we asked him was: What do you think is cooler a PC or a Mac Computer? He responded quickly with, "PC is cooler because it is not as new and it is still around." Then we went in for our actual question: What does cool mean to you? In summary he said: "That's a hard question...I don't know. It's hip individual, someone who doesn't try to go down the same path and doesn't think they are cool. Someone who struggles but still comes out with a smile is cool."
Wednesday, December 2, 2009
Interview Two
I think that when you can discover your passion and follow them without caring how, what, who, or why you reach your goals you can become an individual. We can be inspired by others, but not always followers because we can use what they taught us to reach new levels of expression. Would there be a Michael Jackson without James Brown or an Einstein without Newton? Maybe not, but their individual influence is very different to different people at different times in different places. Maybe we're all one ever-changing pool of inspiration and that we shouldn't question if we're all followers or individuals but WHAT people, ideas, and trends we do follow.
Tuesday, December 1, 2009
Interview One
1. What do you think defines cool?
2. Do you consider yourself cool?
3. What subset of a group do you categorize yourself in?
4. Are we all just followers or are there really individuals?
Monday, November 30, 2009
Comments on Short Stories
Monday, November 23, 2009
Short Story
Monday, November 16, 2009
HW 23
If I was forced to define “cool” my idea of it is most likely different than others. I remember in 6th grade on picture day there was a girl who decided to wear a tutu to school, I was so jealous. I wanted to be able to be brave and not care what others thought; I was envious of her and thought she was so cool. When people don’t care about what others think and don’t care what others will or might say it really does make them cooler. They would rather act like themselves than mimic someone else to fit in with the crowd. I honestly think when people try hard and it’s really obvious they are the farthest thing from cool. Maybe the crowd they are with doesn’t even notice the fakeness of their personality and interaction with others but from an onlooker I think it is very clear.
I think sometimes people automatically assume that if ones name is known they are classified as cool. I disagree completely, just because people know who you are doesn’t mean its for a good thing. It could be because you did something stupid and gave yourself a bad reputation and a bunch of rumors. Do people honestly believe that this person rocks? Getting talked about by others doesn’t mean that you are cool because a lot of that talk could be negative. Take setting into account as well yeah maybe someone is cool in one environment but if they were plopped into another world they are not necessarily going to win the cool medal or wear a sticker saying “Hi my name is cool”. Cool can’t be determined from one small group of people or even a large group. Everyone has there own taste of what they feel defines someone as cool.
It frustrates me so much that our society is so obsessive with being cool. I mean I am sure there are people out there who believe that I think I am cool because as humans we are always making accusations. I don’t think I am cool at all, I think I am who I am. Either you like me or you don’t but I don’t go around trying to impress every person I meet. I will admit though that depending on the situation I am in sometimes I change my attitude slightly to relate to who I am with more. This is not to say I change my complete personality but maybe talk about things that spark more connection. This is so cheesy but I think its better to be yourself than waste your whole life being someone else.
Art Project
Monday, November 9, 2009
Final Paper
Introduction:
It may be cliché to start out a paper with a definition but I believe that defining the problem plays a key role in the construction of forming ideas. Addiction: 1: the quality or state of being addicted, 2: compulsive physiological need for a habit-forming drug. (Webster Ninth New Collegiate Dictionary) Why do we get addicted? What triggers our brain to feel the constant need for repetition? The endorphins within ones brain become released and gives the feeling of pleasure. The more this feeling relates to happiness the more it is craved. "Addictions," says Joseph Frascella, director of the division of clinical neuroscience at the National Institute on Drug Abuse (NIDA), "are repetitive behaviors in the face of negative consequences, the desire to continue something you know is bad for you." The more we are told to not do something the more likely we are to continue to keep doing it or start doing it. Many see technology as advancement but in reality we are addicted and it is setting us back in many ways.
Argument 1:
Obesity is caused by another addiction: food. Looking back at history there have been times where it is socially accepted to have a heavier build. People found as though when someone was larger it was a symbol of wealth verses someone who was thinner which symbolized lower class. It is very clear today from not only the media but also the way our society stereotypes people that when an overweight person is seen people view them as lazy and poor. Never the less it has been proven that it can lead to everyday problems and further more being overweight can lead to major long term health problems. In nearly the past 30 years the obesity rate in the United States as gone from the national average being 15% to 25% in the year 2009. It is due to unhealthy eating habits, non-nutritional meals in our schools and high food prices. The National Strategy to Combat Obesity listed in F as in Fat 2009 – Trust for America’s Health, listed polices that could decrease the obesity rate. “Provide healthy foods and beverages to students at schools, Increase the availability of affordable healthy foods in all communities, Increase the frequency, intensity, and duration of physical activity at school, Improve access to safe and healthy places to live, work, learn, and play, Limit screen time and encourage employers to provide workplace wellness programs.” The professionals stress that our nation needs more physical activity and less screen time. By either creating these habits and or stopping bad habits it will help people who have either addiction to food or bad eating habits due to technology and will make a difference to their general health. These health problems that are partially due to overuse of technology can lead to even worse issues such as diabetes, heart attacks, bad cholesterol etc.
Argument 2:
As the generation that has literally had technology at their fingertips since the second of arriving to this planet one would think that we would be the most addicted. Regardless of when you start, once you start using technology you may automatically becoming part of a cyber world that is pretty physically impossible to exit. While conducting interviews with five random people in New York City (9/23/09) approximately all of them spent 6 hours a day using technology. That number could be skewed because the person was embarrassed to admit their actual number of hours complete considering humans don’t like to admit to problems. Most of the people interviewed, except for one, said that if they had children they would allow them to use technology. The one exception thought they would be better off outside playing or taking in nature. As a big technology user I will admit that I watch television on Mondays and Thursdays. Sometimes I watch it if I really have nothing else to do but usually there is nothing on that really sparks my interest. I am constantly texting unless I am sleeping or my mother takes my phone away. I am usually on the computer when I have spare moments or I am not outside or at School. Honestly, I know I have a problem. The interesting thing is though that my parents didn’t allow me to watch television until I was about two. When I asked my mom why she said: “We decided there were more important things for you to be doing.” Yet even though for 2 years out of my almost 17 years of being alive I wasn’t exposed to as much technology I am just as addicted as the teen sitting next to me who has always had it in their life. That’s what’s interesting that once you start there really is no turning back.
Argument 3:
As a world dealing with the current issue of global warming, shouldn’t this be a huge STOP sign that we hit? All of the warnings are being made so clear but yet the ideas being proposed to us are making no impact on our actions in following them. Some people are buying solar cars and some people are building homes with solar panels but is everyone? No. There are a lot of people that can’t afford to spend large amounts of money on new fancy equipment that is going to help slow down the process of the damage previous generations and current generations are causing. A huge leader though in trying to move forward is former Vice President, Al Gore. It seems as though in not gaining power of the President of the United States he took a turn in a positive direction to help inform the country of issues previous presidents neglected. In one of his very important speeches, A Generational Challenge to Repower America he stated: “In order to foster international cooperation, it is also essential that the United States rejoin the global community and lead efforts to secure an international treaty at Copenhagen in December of next year that includes a cap on CO2 emissions and a global partnership that recognizes the necessity of addressing the threats of extreme poverty and disease as part of the world's agenda for solving the climate crisis.” All of the pollution being exposed to our planet is not only hurting the health of our environment but the health of the living creatures on it, humans included. What leads back to all of this external damage though is the technology that is giving off negative affects which is creating negative affects to our health. “But if we grab hold of that common thread and pull it hard, all of these complex problems begin to unravel and we will find that we're holding the answer to all of them right in our hand. The answer is to end our reliance on carbon-based fuels.” (Al Gore) While it is very clear that the United States nation is addicted to the burning of fossil fuel, no one is saying that we have to suffer because we are just to lazy. We are ignoring long-term effects and we are always so focused on what’s going on with others verses how certain decisions are having affect on us.
Argument 4:
As New Yorkers it is less likely to see us in a car driving, we are the users of public transportation. Since many drivers believe that they can multi task while driving a vehicle weighing tons drivers are more prone to accidents. Not only have their been accidents due to texting in cars but in even larger vehicles, trains and planes. Just last year in California there was an incident of an engineer killing 25 people including himself and injuring more than 130 others. “California officials today issued a temporary order banning train operators from using cell phones on duty…Federal transportation authorities say the engineer of a Southern California commuter train who ran a red light and slammed into a freight train last Friday…text-messaging on his cell phone. The engineer, Robert Sanchez, who died in the crash, never hit his brakes…Today, the California Public Utilities Commission unanimously passed an emergency order to ban the use of cell phones and other personal electronic devices while operating a train.” Often as I walk down the streets of New York I am doing exactly what this engineer made the mistake of doing. If I look up I usually see many people around me who are also engaged in their cell phones. It’s as if we are wearing earplugs and blocking out all of the life around us to focus on someone inside our phones. This makes us more venerable to bumping into someone but an even more severe life-threatening issue being getting hit by a car. We risk our lives everyday by walking down the street so that we can have constant communication to keep our minds stimulated. Another more recent incident of distraction was when pilots of a Northwest Flight flew a plane 150 miles past their destination. The two pilots Cheney and Cole told investigators they lost track of their location and time due to work they were doing on their laptops. "We simply want to ensure that, with all of the electronic distractions available these days, flying the plane remains the one and only focus," (Sen. Robert Menendez, D-N.J.) They put the lives of both themselves and all of the passengers of the plane at stake. If we are given a task we should be able to focus on it and get the job done but with all of the distractions around us our jobs take longer and in some cases put our lives on the line.
Argument 5:
Lastly though focusing on the matter of mental health. People in this world tend to have very large ideas and know that the only way to express these ideas is through action and words, by making a statement. The truth is we don’t know what’s going to happen with our addictions and we have no idea how different or similar our lifestyles will be in 5 or 10 years. Although in the 1990’s there was a man who tried warning us of the dangers of technology. Ted Kaczynski aka The Unabomber used violent means to get his message across, which I don't agree with. However in his manifesto he put forth ideas about the damage technology has done and continues to do. He was trying to describe how technology caused many of the problems the world was facing at the time. “The bomber sent more devices throughout the 1980s and 1990s, and he wounded and killed several people during his violent career. The UNAbomber eventually mailed a letter in which he threatened to continue his campaign of terror unless The New York Times and other newspapers published a lengthy "manifesto" in which the bomber blamed modern technology for the woes of the world. Editors consulted with authorities and subsequently published the manifesto with the hope that someone might recognize the style and thoughts of the bomber.” The hate for the overuse of technology classified him as a crazy person. In reality though maybe the way he showed his opinion was crazy but the deeper meaning was right on point. The over usage of devices lead him to be mentally unstable to the point where he acted in dangerous manners. It wasn’t necessarily his fault though he was frustrated with the way the world was reacting to gadgets, and wanted to make a change. His brother recognized his writing style and turned him into FBI.
Alternative Point of View:
We must consider the fact that it is possible to live a perfectly fine life without the need for machines and technological devices. Take for example Amish people. They have no technology incorporated into their lives. They have alternatives and can still function normally. In theory I believe they are much more aware of their bodies than we are. Since most of the day we are disembodied we forget to step back and make sure that we are functioning properly because we forget to think about the critical parts of what’s going inside. While people like the Amish can take more time to focus on their health. People forget that it is physically possible to conduct a technology free life. Another example of a group of people who were able to live healthier lives without technology is Colin Beavan from the book “No Impact Man”, which is now a movie as well. He and his family decided that for a year they would literally not use any technology. It was hard for them because they were surrounded by so many temptations but they made it for a whole year. Not only did it reverse his wife’s diabetes but he was a healthier person all around both physically and mentally. It really does have an affect on how we act daily and causes our emotions to tense up. We don’t need it to be happy there are other ways to live and probably for a lot longer because our bodies and minds are actually moving. People forget that even just 100 years ago people were able to life and be happy with just the company of those surrounding them. A world that involves more face-to-face communication, and struggle to get information is very possible but is the world we live in now ready to handle something like that?
Conclusion:
Why does all this matter? Everyday as we sit on our couches, eating our super sized meals, twiddling our thumbs on our full keyboards, where we are constantly updating THE WORLD on every moment of every second of our lives, actual bad things are happening. People are starving, dehydrated; suicide bombers are killing themselves and communities for what? What is provoking all of this? When we watch the news about all of the bad stuff happening it is just making us more depressed so we pick up habits like over eating and smoking, and drinking, and drugs. Is this the purpose intended to fulfill a meaningful life filled with reason? Why do we do the things we do? Technology is worsening and decreasing our life span and happiness in some ways. No we can't determine what happiness is but how can we be happy in the moment we are in when we are constantly disembodied?
The Advantages and Disadvantages to not having internet: Revised Draft
It may be cliché to start out a paper with a definition but I believe that what is about to be defined plays a key role in the construction of forming these ideas. Addiction: 1: the quality or state of being addicted, 2: compulsive physiological need for a habit-forming drug. (Webster Ninth New Collegiate Dictionary) Why do we get addicted? What triggers it in our brain to feel the constant need for repetition? "Addictions," says Joseph Frascella, director of the division of clinical neuroscience at the National Institute on Drug Abuse (NIDA), "are repetitive behaviors in the face of negative consequences, the desire to continue something you know is bad for you." The more we are told to not do something the more likely we are to continue to keep doing it or start doing it. The US has always been an addictive culture; today’s culture deals with a primary addiction with important negative affects, which is technology.
Obesity is caused by another addiction: food. Looking back at history there have been times where it is socially accepted to have a heavier build. People found as though when someone was larger it was a symbol of wealth verses someone who was thinner which symbolized lower class. It is very clear today from not only the media but also the way our society stereotypes people that when an overweight person is seen people view them as lazy and poor. Neither the less it has been proven that being overweight can lead to major long term health problems and also everyday problems. In nearly the past 30 years the obesity rate in the United States as gone from the national average being 15% to 25% in the year 2009. It is due to unhealthy eating habits, non-nutritional meals in our schools and high food prices. The National Strategy to Combat Obesity listed in F as in Fat 2009 – Trust for America’s Health, listed polices that could decrease the obesity rate. “Provide healthy foods and beverages to students at schools, Increase the availability of affordable healthy foods in all communities, Increase the frequency, intensity, and duration of physical activity at school, Improve access to safe and healthy places to live, work, learn, and play, Limit screen time and encourage employers to provide workplace wellness programs.” The professionals flat out said that our nation needs more physical activity and less screen time. By either creating these habits and or stopping bad habits it will help people who have either addiction to food or bad eating habits due to technology, will make a difference to their general health. These health problems that are partially due to overuse of technology can lead to even worse issues such as diabetes, heart attacks, bad cholesterol etc.
As the generation that has literally had technology at their fingertips since the second of arriving to this planet one would think that we would be the most addicted. After several experiments done in the heart of a place filled with many different types of people, conclusions have been formed. Regardless to when you start, once you start using technology you are automatically becoming part of a cyber world that is pretty physically impossible to exit. While conducting interviews with complete strangers the average person was an adult and spent approximately 6 hours a day using technology. Now that number could be completely off because the person was embarrassed to admit their actual number considering humans don’t like to admit to problems. Most of the people interviewed except for one said that if they had children they would allow them to use technology except for one person who thought they would be better off outside. As a big technology user I will admit that I watch Television on Mondays and Thursdays. Sometimes I watch it if I really have nothing else to do but usually there is nothing on that really sparks my interest. I am constantly texting in less I am sleeping or my mother takes my phone away. I am usually on the computer when I have spare moments or I am not outside or at School. Honestly I know I have a problem. The interesting thing is though that my parents didn’t allow me to watch television till I was about two. When I asked my mom why she said: “We decided there were more important things for you to be doing.” Yet even though for 2 years out of my almost 17 years of being alive I wasn’t exposed to as much technology I am just as addicted as the teen sitting next to me who has always had it in their life. That’s what’s interesting that once you start there really is no turning back.
As a world dealing with the current issue of global warming, shouldn’t this be a huge STOP sign that we hit? All of the warnings are being made so clear but yet the ideas being proposed to us are making no impact on our actions following them. Yeah some people are buying solar cars and some people are building homes with solar panels but is everyone, no? There are a lot of people that cant afford to spend large amounts of money on new fancy equipment that is going to help slow down the process of the damage previous generations and current generations are causing. A huge leader though in trying to move forward is should have been president, and vice president Al Gore. It seems as though by not gaining power of the United States he took a turn in a positive direction to help inform the country of things a previous president neglected. In one of his very important speeches, A Generational Challenge to Repower America he stated: “In order to foster international cooperation, it is also essential that the United States rejoin the global community and lead efforts to secure an international treaty at Copenhagen in December of next year that includes a cap on CO2 emissions and a global partnership that recognizes the necessity of addressing the threats of extreme poverty and disease as part of the world's agenda for solving the climate crisis.” All of the pollution being exposed to our planet is not only hurting the health of our environment but the health of the living creatures on it, humans included. What leads back to all of this external damage though is the technology that is giving off negative affects which is creating negative affects to our health. “But if we grab hold of that common thread and pull it hard, all of these complex problems begin to unravel and we will find that we're holding the answer to all of them right in our hand. The answer is to end our reliance on carbon-based fuels.” (Al Gore) No one is saying that we have to suffer we are just to lazy and don’t care about long term affects because we are always so focused on what’s going on with others verses how certain decisions are having affect on us.
Lastly though focusing on the matter of mental health. People in this world tend to have very large ideas and know that the only way to express these ideas is through action and words, by making a statement. The truth is we don’t know what’s going to happen with our addictions and we have no idea how different or similar our lifestyles will be in 5 or 10 years. Although in the 1990’s there was a man who tried warning us too bad we didn’t listen better. Going by the name of the “Unabomber” his statement although violent could of made a huge impact on the future. He was trying to make the idea that technology was the reasoning of many of the problems the world was facing. “The bomber sent more devices throughout the 1980s and 1990s, and he wounded and killed several people during his violent career. The UNAbomber eventually mailed a letter in which he threatened to continue his campaign of terror unless The New York Times and other newspapers published a lengthy "manifesto" in which the bomber blamed modern technology for the woes of the world. Editors consulted with authorities and subsequently published the manifesto with the hope that someone might recognize the style and thoughts of the bomber.” The hate for the overuse of technology classified him as a crazy person. In reality though maybe the way he showed his opinion was crazy but the deeper meaning was right on point. The over usage of devices lead him to be mentally unstable to the point where he acted in dangerous manners. It wasn’t necessarily his fault though he was frustrated with the way the world was reacting to gadgets, and wanted to make a change. His brother recognized his writing style and turned him into FBI.
Although we must consider the fact that it is possible to live a perfectly fine life without the need for machine. Take for example Amish people. They have no technology incorporated into their lives. They have alternatives and can still function normally. Essentially though they are much more aware of their bodies than we are. Since most of the day we are so embodied we forget to step back and make sure that we are functioning properly because we forget to think about the critical parts of what’s going inside. While people like the Amish can take more time to focus on their health. People forget that it is physically possible to conduct a technology free life. Another example of a group of people who were able to live healthier lives without technology is Colin Beaven from the book “No Impact Man”, which is now a movie as well. He and his family decided that for a year they would literally not use any technology. It was hard because we are surrounded by it so much but they did it. No only did it reverse his wife’s diabetes but he was a healthier person all around both physically and mentally. It really does have an affect on how we act daily and causes our emotions to tense up. We don’t need it to be happy there are other ways to live and probably for a lot longer because our bodies and minds are actually moving. People forget that even just 100 years ago people were able to life and be happy with just the company of those surrounding them. A world that involves more face-to-face communication, and struggle to get information is very possible but is the world we live in now ready to handle something like that?
So what? Everyday as we sit on our couches, eating our super sized meals, twiddling our thumbs on our full keyboards, where we are constantly updating THE WORLD on every moment of every second of our lives, actual bad things are happening. People are starving, dehydrated; suicide bombers are killing themselves and communities for what? What is provoking all of this? When we watch the news about all of the bad stuff happening it is just making us more depressed so we pick up habits like over eating and smoking, and drinking, and drugs. Is this the purpose intended to fulfill a meaningful life filled with reason? Why do we do the things we do? Technology is worsening and decreasing our life span and happiness in some ways. No we cant determine what happiness is but how can we be happy in the moment we are in when we are constantly being reminded of all the bad?
Friday, November 6, 2009
Personal Grades
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 2.5
Connections and Significance: 2
Opposing POV: 3
Communication Written: 2
Communication Performance: 2
Total: 17.25
Comments on Drafts
FIrst of all if its possible try to organize this so its easier to read because I can't really understand it fully in the way you organized it. I really only noticed one solid quote so it would probably be helpful to look up more evidence online. I think the second thesis is better and more powerful. I feel like you kept repeating yourself with a lot of the arguments and you may need to rethink your arguments so that you have multiply ideas. Post a revised draft if you have one so that I can comment it.
HW 17 PART 2
I broke down the comments so that there are suggestions for each part of your paper.
I like your EQ, as for your thesis maybe you could say: The Digital World defines reality off of stimulation's and representations from technology.
Argument One: I think the way you related it to yourself is actually quite interesting. Maybe you can explain exactly what you do instead of using technology. I think that would show the reader the endless possibilities of alternatives. In reality what you are saying is quite true to most teens, we are absorbed with the gadgets.
Argument Two: I feel like your Argument One and Argument Two are very similar. You discuss how it is a way to keep in touch. Maybe you can elaborate your Argument Two more with strong evidence of it besides what your Mom said.
Argument Three: I find this very interesting, I don't have my notes in front of me but I know that Andy talked a great deal about this idea. Maybe you can try to interview someone who lives in the country and compare it to a city kid. I have a feeling that the results would be very different.
Conclusion: Make sure it connects back to whatever your thesis ends up being.
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Rough Draft - Final Paper
It may be cliché to start out a paper with a definition but I believe that what is about to be defined plays a key role in the construction of forming these ideas. Addiction: 1: the quality or state of being addicted, 2: compulsive physiological need for a habit-forming drug. (Webster Ninth New Collegiate Dictionary) Why do we get addicted? What triggers it in our brain to feel the constant need for repetition? "Addictions," says Joseph Frascella, director of the division of clinical neuroscience at the National Institute on Drug Abuse (NIDA), "are repetitive behaviors in the face of negative consequences, the desire to continue something you know is bad for you." The more we are told to not do something the more likely we are to continue to keep doing it or start doing it. Through the overuse of technology present throughout the United States not only is it leading to addiction but also to more severe health problems, both physically and mentally.
Looking back at history there have been times where it is socially accepted to have a heavier build. People found as though when someone was larger it was a symbol of wealth verses someone who was thinner which symbolized lower class. It is very clear today from not only the media but also the way our society stereotypes people that when an overweight person is seen people view them as lazy and poor. Neither the less it has been proven that being overweight can lead to major long term health problems and also everyday problems. In nearly the past 30 years the obesity rate in the United States as gone from the national average being 15% to 25% in the year 2009. It is due to unhealthy eating habits, non-nutritional meals in our schools and high food prices. The National Strategy to Combat Obesity listed in F as in Fat 2009 – Trust for America’s Health, listed polices that could decrease the obesity rate. “Provide healthy foods and beverages to students at schools, Increase the availability of affordable healthy foods in all communities, Increase the frequency, intensity, and duration of physical activity at school, Improve access to safe and healthy places to live, work, learn, and play, Limit screen time and encourage employers to provide workplace wellness programs.” The professionals flat out said that our nation needs more physical activity and less screen time. By either creating these habits and or stopping bad habits it will help people who have either addiction to food or bad eating habits due to technology, will make a difference to their general health. These health problems that are partially due to overuse of technology can lead to even worse issues such as diabetes, heart attacks, bad cholesterol etc.
As the generation that has literally had technology at their fingertips since the second of arriving to this planet one would think that we would be the most addicted. After several experiments done in the heart of a place filled with many different types of people, conclusions have been formed. Regardless to when you start, once you start using technology you are automatically becoming part of a cyber world that is pretty physically impossible to exit. While conducting interviews with complete strangers the average person was an adult and spent approximately 6 hours a day using technology. Now that number could be completely off because the person was embarrassed to admit their actual number considering humans don’t like to admit to problems. Most of the people interviewed except for one said that if they had children they would allow them to use technology except for one person who thought they would be better off outside. As a big technology user I will admit that I watch Television on Mondays and Thursdays. Sometimes I watch it if I really have nothing else to do but usually there is nothing on that really sparks my interest. I am constantly texting in less I am sleeping or my mother takes my phone away. I am usually on the computer when I have spare moments or I am not outside or at School. Honestly I know I have a problem. The interesting thing is though that my parents didn’t allow me to watch television till I was about two. When I asked my mom why she said: “We decided there were more important things for you to be doing.” Yet even though for 2 years out of my almost 17 years of being alive I wasn’t exposed to as much technology I am just as addicted as the teen sitting next to me who has always had it in their life. That’s what’s interesting that once you start there really is no turning back.
As a world dealing with the current issue of global warming, shouldn’t this be a huge STOP sign that we hit? All of the warnings are being made so clear but yet the ideas being proposed to us are making no impact on our actions following them. Yeah some people are buying solar cars and some people are building homes with solar panels but is everyone, no? There are a lot of people that cant afford to spend large amounts of money on new fancy equipment that is going to help slow down the process of the damage previous generations and current generations are causing. A huge leader though in trying to move forward is should have been president, and vice president Al Gore. It seems as though by not gaining power of the United States he took a turn in a positive direction to help inform the country of things a previous president neglected. In one of his very important speeches, A Generational Challenge to Repower America he stated: “In order to foster international cooperation, it is also essential that the United States rejoin the global community and lead efforts to secure an international treaty at Copenhagen in December of next year that includes a cap on CO2 emissions and a global partnership that recognizes the necessity of addressing the threats of extreme poverty and disease as part of the world's agenda for solving the climate crisis.” All of the pollution being exposed to our planet is not only hurting the health of our environment but the health of the living creatures on it, humans included. What leads back to all of this external damage though is the technology that is giving off negative affects which is creating negative affects to our health. “But if we grab hold of that common thread and pull it hard, all of these complex problems begin to unravel and we will find that we're holding the answer to all of them right in our hand. The answer is to end our reliance on carbon-based fuels.” (Al Gore) No one is saying that we have to suffer we are just to lazy and don’t care about long term affects because we are always so focused on what’s going on with others verses how certain decisions are having affect on us.
Lastly though focusing on the matter of mental health. People in this world tend to have very large ideas and know that the only way to express these ideas is through action and words, by making a statement. The truth is we don’t know what’s going to happen with our addictions and we have no idea how different or similar our lifestyles will be in 5 or 10 years. Although in the 1990’s there was a man who tried warning us too bad we didn’t listen better. Going by the name of the “Unabomber” his statement although violent could of made a huge impact on the future. He was trying to make the idea that technology was the reasoning of many of the problems the world was facing. “The bomber sent more devices throughout the 1980s and 1990s, and he wounded and killed several people during his violent career. The UNAbomber eventually mailed a letter in which he threatened to continue his campaign of terror unless The New York Times and other newspapers published a lengthy "manifesto" in which the bomber blamed modern technology for the woes of the world. Editors consulted with authorities and subsequently published the manifesto with the hope that someone might recognize the style and thoughts of the bomber.” The hate for the overuse of technology classified him as a crazy person. In reality though maybe the way he showed his opinion was crazy but the deeper meaning was right on point. The over usage of devices lead him to be mentally unstable to the point where he acted in dangerous manners. It wasn’t necessarily his fault though he was frustrated with the way the world was reacting to gadgets, and wanted to make a change.
Although we must consider the fact that it is possible to live a perfectly fine life without the need for machine. Take for example Amish people. They have no technology incorporated into their lives. They have alternatives and can still function normally. Essentially though they are much more aware of their bodies than we are. Since most of the day we are so embodied we forget to step back and make sure that we are functioning properly because we forget to think about the critical parts of what’s going inside. While people like the Amish can take more time to focus on their health. People forget that it is physically possible to conduct a technology free life. Another example of a group of people who were able to live healthier lives without technology is Colin Beaven from the book “No Impact Man”, which is now a movie as well. He and his family decided that for a year they would literally not use any technology. It was hard because we are surrounded by it so much but they did it. No only did it reverse his wife’s diabetes but he was a healthier person all around both physically and mentally. It really does have an affect on how we act daily and causes our emotions to tense up. We don’t need it to be happy there are other ways to live and probably for a lot longer because our bodies and minds are actually moving. People forget that even just 100 years ago people were able to life and be happy with just the company of those surrounding them. A world that involves more face-to-face communication, and struggle to get information is very possible but is the world we live in now ready to handle something like that?
So what? Everyday as we sit on our couches, eating our super sized meals, twiddling our thumbs on our full keyboards, where we are constantly updating THE WORLD on every moment of every second of our lives, actual bad things are happening. People are starving, dehydrated; suicide bombers are killing themselves and communities for what? What is provoking all of this? When we watch the news about all of the bad stuff happening it is just making us more depressed so we pick up habits like over eating and smoking, and drinking, and drugs. Is this the purpose intended to fulfill a meaningful life filled with reason? Why do we do the things we do? Technology is worsening and decreasing our life span and happiness. No we cant determine what happiness is but how can we be happy in the moment we are in when we are constantly being reminded of all the bad?